-What I like about her writing is that she starts out evrything with a story of Rosa. Then she gets into talking about the sex trade in cambodia.
-The biggest strength of her paper is the research that she has done and the information that she has given to the reader. One weakness that she has is she doesnt really explain how it relates to her or to the reader and what significance this is.
-I forgot what adding "action" is. But she said in the paper that if you wanted to get involved you could just help raise awareness, of the sex trafficing, to local people around you.
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